Presentation hygiene and the advanced checklist
If the slide repeats the chart's numbers as bullets, delete the bullets and write why.
Hygiene: consistent fonts and sizes, chart titles, labelled axes, sources and assumptions with explicit months (not 'last 6 months'), no long sentences, charts over text. Advanced: the deck tells a story; every slide has a reason to exist (extras to the appendix); explain why and versus which period rather than restating numbers; every slide has a call to action; end with actions and the insights behind them. He suggests screenshotting the checklist.
The solution to the deck exercise and the missing Chapter 7 in one list.