An author asks for feedback on her landing page and is told to close it and open a Google Doc.
Jane, an author new to online work, built a testimonial site to meet 'people who resonate with the ideas of healing, feeling, art, creativity'. Harshit: 'I see a lot of text' - visitors skim, so each scroll position needs one element in focus. Asked what the agenda is, she says she is 'figuring it out as I go along'. His advice: 'forget about the landing page as of now, just pull up a Google doc', dictate or ramble what you want to teach and which pains you solve, refine it, and only then turn the page into a storyboard where a visitor scrolling top to bottom connects with her story and what she can do for them. Her video belongs in the hero. 'It's not about design or elements or using AI the right way; it's actually about telling the right story.' For a writer the page is secondary: publish weekly (Substack), end every post with a call to action, and you 'increase your luck surface'. He points her to writers whose own sites are worth studying (Dan Koe, Kapil Gupta). By the end of the hour another member had built her a scrollytelling site around the video.
The same test applies to any client site: story and audience first, page last.





